The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/17
A wonderful devotion piece. Adding some examples would make it a dynamic piece. Thanks for those words of wisdom. I had to think a little about "Wash line". I think that is what I call a "clothes line", where you hang laundry. That might be silly but keep in mind that words and phrases mean different things in different parts of the globe.
This is a powerful devotion with some good advice. If you haven't submitted a devotion to FW daily devotions, I'd urge you to do so.

My only red ink was the transition from the wallaby to saying the wrong things. It didn't really connect. I know you need to do that for the topic, but the example didn't totally fit the next part.

I do like that you gave a real-life example. That makes it easy to relate to and pulls in readers who might not normally read a devotion. You did a good job.