The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/17
Very inspiring -- I want to be more like Bud Jones. Taking time for new believers and our fellow brethren is our great commission. Thank you!
01/28/17
The patience and love brought out in the message of this story is inspirational. A suggestion would be to tighten up some of the sentences by removing any unnecessary words or phrases. This suggestion was a great help to me. Keep writing.
01/31/17
I love how you took an ordinary life situation and turned into a moment where an everyday person (who happens to be a believer) uses the moment to bring someone in an encounter with God. Awesome stuff!

Btw I really like the character's name Jason...that is a good strong name.
02/02/17
Great job!
Blessings~