The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/17
This is beautiful. We live in a society that preaches "challenge yourself." "Strive to be better." The reality is God intends for us to live in the now.

Thank you for sharing.
01/27/17
This had great flow and pace-an easy read with a heart warming ending.
02/01/17
Well written story with a good message. Just watch your grammar a bit.
I liked the way you used much 'show' and little 'tell'
02/02/17
Well done!
Blessings~