The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/17
Beautiful touching emotional entry with a strong message of mercy and how love endures through His grace!

Slate wiped clean...going forward...no rear view window...a new start!

You've captured the essence of the topic in your well written entry.

God bless~
Wow you did a great job on this. I've read a few released from prison story this week, but this one felt quite intimate. You gave me a great glimpse into the MC's heart and soul. Be careful about switching tenses. The present tense is a great choice for this story, but it is difficult to do. There were a couple of tiny spots where you could have tightened the sentences some, but overall you did a great job. The pacing matched his situation. A bit urgent and choppy, yet there is a few lulls that showcase hope. I truly enjoyed this at it touched my heart. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 14 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
01/20/17
Thanks, Ken, for this great story of God's redeeming grace.

It touched my heart, and your 1st place is well deserved! Congratulations.

God bless.
01/21/17
This story pulled me in from the start & I was immediately sympathetic to the MC. However, do think it would have been even more compelling told in first person-just my opinion. Not surprised at the 1st place Advanced finish. Congratulations!
02/21/17
A very touching and inspiring story. Thank God for his grace.

Congrats on placing first in this category.

Many Blessings!
02/25/17
Congratulations on your level win. I thought your presentation of a prodigal was a good choice fro the topic.