The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/17
I loved this. Your dialog was great. The story flowed. Great job. I liked the open-ended ending.

Hope this does well in the Challenge.

God bless - Trudy
01/14/17
Excellent way to approach the topic...well done, well written.

God bless~
01/14/17
Great teaching tool to witness. Great job.
I enjoyed the surprise "Twilight-Zone-like" ending. I am also appreciating the fresh creativity that you are bringing to the challenge.