The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/16
Nicely done!
God bless~
I enjoyed your unique take on the topic. You did a good job of sustaining suspense.
12/02/16
A different take on the birth of Jesus from what could have been the innkeepers story. Some times we don't know why the Lord has us do things until revealed later. Good job. Blessings, LaVonne
12/04/16
Lovely story. I didn't recognize it was the innkeeper until the very end.

I think it should do well this week.
12/04/16
My only suggestion would be to explain the word keffeyeh.
I like your title, "Blind Building". That is something like we do when we write. We may never know who will ever read what we write but that does not mean we shouldn't write.
Your writing should send a message to all who may be thinking of giving up on writing. Writing is not a waste of time but putting it to good use. It is ours to do our best because we never know who will use it.
12/06/16
A good imaginative telling of an old story. Well Done!!!
12/07/16
Sweet take on the topic. I enjoyed this.
12/10/16
I told you I can spot a special writer!! This is a fantastic piece and you deserve this win.
Congratulations and may the Lord continue to inspire your words.
01/26/17
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