The Official Writing Challenge
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Great poem. Congratulations on 59 years!!
I don't know a thing about poetry, but I do know this made me laugh and want to keep reading. I'll let others give helpful critiques. If you can get me to read poetry to the end, well, you've done something; whatever that's worth.
This piece delighted me. I enjoyed the light-hearted pacing. It's pretty cool how disasters can turn into delights.