The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/16
I liked how you used the calendar as an example of how we are, in a way, predicting our future.
A little red ink comment I would make is in your quote in the first paragraph.(...of chance;It is..) A capital letter should only be used after a semicolon when the word is a proper noun or a word that would normally be capitalized. A semicolon joins two complete sentences (independent clauses) and makes them one sentence.
The second paragraph was a little confusing to me and I wonder if it would have been better to go straight to the third where you do a good job supporting your position that we are placing our destiny in the spaces.
great job. Reminded me of how I need to trust God to help me fill my calendar.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. Happy Dance.