The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved reading your story.

You caught my attention with the opening sentence, went on to describe the mystery, and then ended with a well-written "prescription" to teach us how to take care of the bodies we have been given.

Your advice, being given through first-hand experience, was not bossy or boring.

Much easier to read and more interesting than a list of rules. Thank you for sharing.
I love this story. Not because the health professionals come out looking good (they don't, and as a former nurse, I cringed as I read), but because of your faith and gentle forgiving nature. What a wonderful lesson. Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. Happy Dance!