The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/16
Yes, serving God definitely requires us to rest first. We cannot hear God clearly about the doing,if we do not rest in Him. This was a very insightful doctor and I presume a Christian! A few red pen comments worth mentioning. Apostrophe needed in the Title: Doctor's Verdict and there is no need to begin a new line and quotes if the same speaker. Nice piece of work.
This life story should be read by many and acted upon as needed.

This was easy to read even when there was one word in a sentence missing. See if you can find it.