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10/13/16
i also enjoy the birdsong early in the morning.It reminds me of a song I sang in Sunday School many years ago. 'Little birds their maker praise, why not I? Why not I?'
10/16/16
This person must live an area with a great diversity of birds! There is definitely an overload of them, but in a positive way. I liked the ending ...more performances to come!
All that "bird talk" is their way of thanking God for the food he will be feeding them that day.

That evening their "bird talk" will be their thanks to God for all the food he had given them.

I even wrote a poem about them on time as they did this.

I liked you colorful description of each bird as they came on stage and took up their place in the program.

Well done.
10/20/16
Congratulations Jennifer on receiving Highly Commended!