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10/14/16
Fantastic story. I like the pace and the ending that shows he did choose life. :) Your "salsa" words also brought the plot to life.
10/15/16
Awesome verb usage, making your story come alive. Liked the ending, with the hope of a second chance for the young man.
10/17/16
Very gripping and intense. You are on topic for sure. Thanks for sharing.
The only question I have is this the first chapter to the story or is it the final chapter.

Descriptive, drama filled.
Excellent, Anne. I'm surprised this wasn't in the EC list.
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