The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a fresh take on this topic. I thought the ending didn't quite flow- I'd like to think the talks with her dad were just beginning...but that's just me. Overall the story touched me & I wanted to know more...that's good writing.
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Congratulations Joy on your first place ranking. Keep writing from your heart - looking forward to reading more from you.