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Such beautiful memories you remembered. It reminds me of "My favorite things" in Sound of Music"

I probably would not have ended with To Be Continued. While I understand you were trying to point out many cherished memories would be in your future, it felt a little anti-climatic compared with your other uplifting sentiments.

I have always wanted to go to Hawaii so I was interested in how you won a trip there.

Thank you for taking us down memory road with you.
Beautiful! Simply beautiful!

God bless~