The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/16
This was a nice devotional. I noticed in para. 3 the word vilified. I don't think that was the right word, but for the life of me can't grasp the word you wanted.
08/25/16
This has a nice steady flow where you retell the story very well.
08/26/16
A lovely retelling of an old, old story.
08/27/16
Beautiful!

God bless~
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