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08/25/16
Great reminder that we should appreciate the people in our lives while we still have the opportunity.
08/25/16
I liked the gamut of emotions you conveyed via the MC. You did a good job on this. I would suggest more white space for easier reading.
08/27/16
a thoughtful story. As Christians we have the hope of meeting our loved ones in Heaven. What a blessed hope this is! It is the time in between them dying and our meeting again that is difficult for us.
08/27/16
My condolences for your painful and significant loss.

My heart ached as I read about your discovery of your beloved dad's illness, to the deeply moving ending of your "connection" to him during his last days.

You had an amazing Dad. Keep those treasured memories in your heart until you see him again...

God bless you~
09/01/16
Your moving account illustrates the only way the douleur dans la mort can turn into the joie de vivre-- knowing Christ. Thank you for sharing.