The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/16
You story is interesting and dramatic, but I must admit I got lost a couple of times.

It's probably just me. Thanks for sharing.
08/11/16
Certainly was creepy. Congrats.
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08/12/16
Wow, I liked how you brought the gospel story into it - in a creative new way. Well done!