The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/16
This story was a blessing.There were a few words that seemed to be misused such as anxiety began to debilitate (maybe you meant diminish?) and healing would benefit (result?). I am not familiar with "cringible". I didn't look it up to see if it really is a word, although your meaning was perfectly clear with its use.