The Official Writing Challenge
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This is truly precious. A great take on topic and more than just one lesson taught. Great job on this.
Aww. So sweet. Good job.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 21 overall. Happy Dance!
Congratulations on your rankings! You have done a nice job of interspersing the information from the previous day's emergency throughout the story, showing the tension between the grandmother and daughter, and tiing it up with a wonderful bow of forgiveness.
loved this story, a child's trust in God is so complete. Congratulations on 3rd place