The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/16
This is truly precious. A great take on topic and more than just one lesson taught. Great job on this.
08/04/16
Aww. So sweet. Good job.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 21 overall. Happy Dance!
Congratulations on your rankings! You have done a nice job of interspersing the information from the previous day's emergency throughout the story, showing the tension between the grandmother and daughter, and tiing it up with a wonderful bow of forgiveness.
08/11/16
loved this story, a child's trust in God is so complete. Congratulations on 3rd place