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Topic: TRUST (07/21/16)
By Elise Delarosa
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
- No I'm not
Yes, I'm sure my feelings are hurt
- Well if they are you hurt your own damn feelings
Uh how am I doing that?
- You're too sensitive
Okay I'm sorry
You're hurting me
- Not that again - can't I do anything right?
I just want you to stop
- How can I stop what I'm not doing?
- I'm not doing anything wrong
But it feels like you're hurting me
- Well I'm not
I'm hurting more
- Take some meds
- Whatever works
Meds make me feel bad
- You have got to get your act together
- I know, I'm sorry
I think we need some help
- No we don't - you do
Ok - I'm gonna get some help
The man says it takes two and there are two sides and you aren't that bad
- Damn right
- I've gotta get back to uwork
I'm still hurting
- You've got to be kidding me - what now?
My heart is dying
- Well that can't POSSIBLY be my fault
What can we do?
- I have absolutely no idea but it's certainly not MY fault
(Blink blink swallow)
- (Rolls his eyes)
- What is it?
- Well, what's your problem this time?
I don't know how to say it
- Then you probably shouldn't
- When's dinner?
I had to leave
- What about me?
- But what about ME?
I was hurting too much
- I SAID what about ME?
I couldn't breathe anymore
- You obviously aren't listening - you are so DAMN selfish - WHAT ABOUT ME?
- I didn't ask
But I'm getting stronger
- I'm right you know
I'm healing and I can breathe better
- But you're selfish and I know I'm right
Maybe not - maybe I'm not that selfish
- But I have to be right
- I don't know but I just HAVE TO BE RIGHT!
I can't come back right now
- Why not? What's wrong with you?
I'm not sure there is anything wrong with me but I can't come back yet
- You're crazy
Maybe, maybe not, but I know I can't come back right now
- But I'm right
I'm not sure about that, but I do feel safe over here
I'm in a safe place
- Don't use that word
But it's true - that's what I feel
- So? I don't like that word - you aren't allowed to use that word - if you use that word I'm hanging up on you
- Stop. I'm stronger now
- Safe is how I feel and safe is the word I will use because it's true. If you don't want to hear me use the word safe, don't call me
- When are you coming back?
Nothing has changed - you still yell and I still cry
- I don't yell and you're just too sensitive
That is not true
- Yes it is and I'm still right
Ok you can be right all by yourself cause I'm not coming back
- Nothing - things just didn't work out but I still want to say you're wrong and I'm right
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