The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/16
This is a beautiful story of God's love for us, always watching and caring for those who have chosen to follow Him. You write well and drew me in to the helplessness you were experiencing that day. Thank you for sharing.
08/02/16
An effective lesson in the folly of pre-judgement.
Occasionally a story true or not, is indelibly stamped in the reader's brain. I will never look at anyone who looks like a beggar ( for lack of a better word ) without recalling this story.
What more can a writer hope for?
Excellent story, well told.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. Happy Dance.