The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/16
Every writer struggles with what to write. You painted the picture of the frustrations very well. I especially liked your wording where the phone rang sliced through her thoughts.

In this sentence, you could have used other words to paint a better picture. The duplicity of devoid takes away from what I think you were trying to express.
"Like a place devoid of promising life, the mind is devoid of promising thoughts"

The poem is lovely. I enjoyed your article.
08/03/16
I enjoyed your story, especially this sentence: Panic happens when it has to be done now, trust happens when the writer waits for God. I feel like placing this above my computer when struggling with ideas. Thank you! Great job!
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level and 27 overall. Happy Dance!
08/04/16
Thanks for these kind comments - good to be back writing again at Faithwriters.