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Every writer struggles with what to write. You painted the picture of the frustrations very well. I especially liked your wording where the phone rang sliced through her thoughts.

In this sentence, you could have used other words to paint a better picture. The duplicity of devoid takes away from what I think you were trying to express.
"Like a place devoid of promising life, the mind is devoid of promising thoughts"

The poem is lovely. I enjoyed your article.
I enjoyed your story, especially this sentence: Panic happens when it has to be done now, trust happens when the writer waits for God. I feel like placing this above my computer when struggling with ideas. Thank you! Great job!
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level and 27 overall. Happy Dance!
Thanks for these kind comments - good to be back writing again at Faithwriters.