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07/30/16
This is such a relatable story, especially during bad economic times. You covered the topic well. One little blip: 911 needs a hyphen to read as the date 9-11, not emergency number 911. I really like how the story unfolded. You captured the MCs expressions as if I was there seeing them happen in real time. Nice job!
07/31/16
I didn't catch the date hyphen missing until I read it online.