The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderful story.
Ahhhh...nice! I like to wonder if those in heaven see us, too. I know it's difficult in such a short story, but I suggest staying with one POV, instead of bouncing back and forth from one place to another. I like the happy ending.
What a sweet and tender story. You pulled me into the story, and kept my interest through the end. Nice job.
A lovely feel good story. I always feel encouraged thinking that our loved ones that have gone before are not lost to us, that we will all be together again one day.
I would say this had to have been written by a Mom who has a grown-up daughter.

Beautifully written.

Maybe from the Midwest where the tornadoes live.
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