The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/16
Your poem is a great reminder of God’s unconditional love for His children.
I see that at some places you shift your thoughts but I even see that in some of David's Psalms.

I think each are of thought has to be taken and studied to get your intended meaning and thoughts.

Keep writing what you like to write.