The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/16
I can tell you put a lot of work into this. Just one piece of advice. Your writing needs white space. Without that, it's harder to read. Keep up the good work.
07/23/16
I totally agree with the comment before mine. This needs white space and I mean by that it should not be one long paragraph.
I also thought that the word times does not need to follow Old Testament.
I really liked the analogy of going out and doing something instead of just sitting on the shelf assured of our salvation but not sharing it.
07/25/16
Biblical and timeless Christian message to those who name the name of Christ. Thanks for sharing.
What commands of Jesus are we failing to do because we have lost our first love. Our bad example pushes more people away from Christ than our weak words draw them to Christ. Continue your strong admonishment to repent so our words will be able to draw people to Christ.

Keep your heart in heaven and your eyes in His word.
07/26/16
Thank you for sharing this informative and important entry.

You are obviously a sincere student of the Bible. I appreciate your insight.