The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/06
"...and fully appreciate my forgiveness..." I loved that! Good job!
01/12/06
Boo hoo! I felt so sad for whatever it was and then when I read it was a dog... you expressed his feelings so well..especially when he pressed his head out of the screen. I must have my daughter read this one!Great job!
01/12/06
From a dog lover, it's a good thing this had a good ending! I was going to come after you if it didn't - and it was true! Wow! What a story! A whole week - poor thing! I'm sure he got pampered after that. Great storytelling! (as always! ;) )
Incredible! Great story!!
01/13/06
That poor doggie! Seems to be a pretty smart (and determined) doggie too. Well written - nice surprise ending. Perfect entry for "escape." :-)
Blessings, Lynda
Liked this-first I thought it was an old man trying to "escape and find Katie" but then to find out it was a dog gave it a great twist!
01/13/06
Well done. I really enjoyed this. What a great job at getting into the dog's mind. And I'm so glad the dog is okay now.
01/13/06
It's difficult to write a true story, but you did a smack-up job.
A canine 'Home Alone!' Poor old dog, but what great little story, and I was rooting for the dog all the way. God bless.
01/16/06
'... fully appreciate my forgiveness.' Ahhh, the unconditional, undeserved love of one's dog! Well written, engaging story. Sucked me right in.
01/18/06
Beth, Well told. At first I thought it was a personified toy, then I thought it was a cat. No way it could be a dog, especially not an old one. Amazing! Thanks for sharing it.