The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/16
Great story. I liked the dialogue. I thought the last paragraph needed some reworking. It seemed rather awkward. For ex, "if I was pardoned" could have come earlier in the sentence. As it was I had to read it twice to understand.
06/21/16
This sounds so authentic. I love how the Lord moved on these men's hearts so suddenly with such a drastic change. What an obvious miracle. Well done.
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