The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/16
Well said. I agree wholeheartedly. Nice job.
This is an interesting devotion. It started with a great Bible verse. You made some wonderful points and definitely wrote on topic. My only suggestion might be to share an example of when you fix led, but then returned. For me personally, I enjoy devotions with a first person singular voice and those that end in prayer, but everyone is different. If you haven't submitted any devotions to FW's daily devotion, I'd urge you to do so. You definitely have a gift for writing devotions