The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1302 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/09/06
Yikes! Well done, and you tapped into my phobia very effectively. Good writing here.
01/11/06
Woooo - loved the end twist.
Oooh-spooky! Good writing- kept me captivated.
01/12/06
This was great! I liked how you dropped a few descriptive hints here and there..took me by surprise where you were going. Nice writing.
01/12/06
Good job! Well written and intriguing. Full of suspense.
ewww. spiders. :) Very well written!
You wove quite a web with this one!! Caught me and held me all the way! Great little foreshadowing ploy with the spider in the glass at the beginning.
Creepy! Crawly! Whew - they're gone!!! :-)

Since I came to know the Lord Jesus, I have had a passion for Prophecy. Your story is the first I have seen on this, I hope you may consider more on the last days, in these Last Days!