The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful article! Great insight into God being a writer too, and great use of scripture to illustrate your points. Thanks for this cleverly crafted entry.
You brought out some great truths. Well done.
I'm sure you enjoyed your first computer, and likely have graduated to a newer one by now.

Red ink:
Having half of your story be scripture passages removes you as being the writer. I know many people like to quote passages, yet you have so many that it distracts from your capabilities as a writer. Stretch yourself as a writer and find your voice.
Great job with this!

I found this especially likable. My favorite part was realizing that God has my biography sitting on his book shelves. Even though I know that God knows everything about me, I never thought of it in this way. It made me smile.