The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/16
Enjoyable read, but I didn't see anything about a wife?
05/27/16
Great story, but I don't get where he ended up with a wife. You are creative with words, describing scenes like you're painting a picture. Nice job.
05/28/16
So where is his wife? Was it supposed to be Anna?
Or was the computer to be his wife?
Confused.
05/30/16
I thought you had good descriptions in your story. I too resisted giving into the computer world.
05/31/16
Excellent!!

Blessings~
06/01/16
Thanks for the reminder that there is nothing like reading a book with paper pages!

While your title was very long, it grabbed my attention, but like a couple of others commented, I am confused about the missing wife. That aside, nice job.

06/02/16
Thanks for a fun read. Was this missing wife hidden within a Wifi/wife-eye connection?
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