The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/16
The mother, she steals.... This construction makes for, at least for me, an awkard read. I liked the message you portrayed.
05/25/16
An interesting read. Many of the sentence structures seem odd to me. Perhaps you could rewrite some of the sentences and take out some commas.
God Bless
05/26/16
Great message!

Blessings~