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Great story. Believable dialogue.You highlighteda serious problem in our society in an interesting way.
So sad a story but you captured and conveyed it so clearly. Inner dialogue was very effective. Great job on this one!
My heart ached reading this story that truly is so prevalent in society. I remember while in college I did a report on abused women and children and it's in my mind and heart so vividly now as it was back then.

Great job with this topic!

Congrats Nicki! What a great job you did on this one.
Congratulations on placing highly commendable in the Advanced Category. I'm so glad Jess took the first step in ending the cycle of domestic abuse.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 13 overall.
Sorry I messed up. You ranked 20 overall, but that's still great and worthy of a Happy Dance. (Sorry, I'm getting used to my bifocals again. :) )