The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/16
I thought this was really good. The content was terrific, and you wrote it well too.
05/14/16
Great wisdom in your mission statement. My suggestion is to start with action to hook the reader. Perhaps where you ran out of the room upset. Then you can back track to explain where you were, why,...etc. The 3 questions in the very beginning could be moved to the end, leaving the reader with something to think about. This is good stuff. Well done!
05/14/16
Wow! This was fantastic! I loved loved loved it!

Great job, great message, and great writing!

Blessings~
05/15/16
I enjoyed your very thought-provoking piece. The dialogue portion flowed naturally and was easy to follow. Also, your mission statement added inspiration and could be used as a model for readers to create their own.
05/16/16
Your thoughts flow smoothly through your own experience to amplify your positive challenge. Well done.
05/19/16
Congratulations Judy, on achieving first place! You deserve it!
05/19/16
Congratulations, Judy, on placing 1st place in the Intermediate category. I wrote down your inspirational statement; it is truly one to live by.
05/19/16
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
05/19/16
Congrats!
BLessings~
Judy, Congratulations on 1st place in Advanced. The mission statement stuck with me.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!
05/23/16
Congratulations on 1st Place Level 3 :)
06/13/16
Thank you for sharing your struggle and victory.

You have motivated and encouraged me to consider working on my own mission statement.