The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/16
Excellent writing. You drew the reader in with your descriptions, particularly appealing to the five senses. A sad story laced with hope. Well done.
Excellent job of writing this little known story of history. This was an original take on candy.

The title drew me in to reading the story and was nit disappointed as the characters warmed my heart. It shows there is sweetness in the most difficult times.
05/09/16
Lovely. Sometimes little known stories can be such a blessing, and kindness even makes something as bad as war a little better.
05/11/16
Beautiful!

Excellent job with this.

Blessings~
05/12/16
Great job Bonnie!
Congrats

Blessings~
Congratulations, Bonnie, on your EC for this creative story conveying an interesting snippet of history.
Bonnie, Congratulations on your EC win. Welcome the Masters.
05/12/16
Nicely written story and very interesting. I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations!
05/15/16
Congratulations on 1st Place Advanced and 9th Place EC!
06/03/16
You did a fine job personalizing your piece based on real events.