The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/16
This was a great read.
I really enjoyed it from start to finish.

Blessings~
04/29/16
I liked the line 'you must surrender your will in order to be transformed' which seems to epitomize a teachable spirit. Sophie has the dream, but maybe not the teachable spirit to attain the dream. We are all a bit like Sophie! Great read, very thought provoking.
05/05/16
Very engaging story. I enjoyed it from start to finish.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!
05/06/16
Congratulations, Karen, on your highly commendable placing in the Advanced category and 15th place overall.

I think has Sophie has much to learn and the teacher has much to teach. You did a good job of showing what happens after the lights dim.