The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a great read.
I really enjoyed it from start to finish.

I liked the line 'you must surrender your will in order to be transformed' which seems to epitomize a teachable spirit. Sophie has the dream, but maybe not the teachable spirit to attain the dream. We are all a bit like Sophie! Great read, very thought provoking.
Very engaging story. I enjoyed it from start to finish.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!
Congratulations, Karen, on your highly commendable placing in the Advanced category and 15th place overall.

I think has Sophie has much to learn and the teacher has much to teach. You did a good job of showing what happens after the lights dim.