The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/16
Powerfully done!

Blessings~
04/22/16
You did well describing the mother's demeanour and how it changed. I didn't know what pull-tabs were, but got the gist by the end :P
04/26/16
I was intrigued, but also not knowing what pull tabs were I was confused for awhile.