The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/16
What a sad story, my heart broke reading this. Excellent writing.

Blessings~
04/22/16
You did a great job building the suspense. Well done.
04/22/16
Your story was full of suspense such that I was on the edge of my seat reading it. Well done! And yes, heartbreaking.
04/26/16
Wonderful storytelling. Good suspense building. Heart wrenching. Very well done.
Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level. Happy Dance!