The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/16
So silence can be sociable. I never would have thought of it that way, but in this context, at least, it's spot on.

You need to be careful of verb tenses. The first two paragraphs are in past tense, and most of the rest is in present.
04/15/16
I found this thought provoking. I think words like community are considered collective and use the single verb, rather than plural. I could be wrong. Many moons have risen and set since I was in school.
04/16/16
I loved this! Great way of looking at the topic...well done.

Blessings~
04/19/16
This is such a nice read. I really enjoyed your perspective. Silence can be golden.
04/21/16
Congratulations, Jennifer, on your highly commendable entry in the Advanced category. I think silence is highly underrated in our society.
04/21/16
Thank you for the supportive comments, I am very grateful. Keeping a watch out for tenses from now on!
04/21/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!