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04/14/16
A creative preparation for the wedding feast of the Lamb from God's point of view.

I have a couple of nits to pick. Prerequisite, not per-requisite. Don't use "over" with quantities. Even young-earth creationists consider us much older than 2000 years, so you should write "more than 6000 years.)

The last six paragraphs feel like they're repeating the same thought over and over, so they could be condensed.
I liked how you used the Bible verses to help teach us. There is another place you could have inserted another verse. I would have been with your thought given here:
"then left His spirit to dwell within all believers"
In Acts 2:38 it says that all believers will receive the gift of the Holy Spirit when they are baptized.

Your work is full of important information.
04/16/16
Lovely read!

Well done,

Blessings~
04/19/16
Thanks for sharing your interesting telling of the plan of salvation. Good job.