Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 - Advanced)
Topic: SOCIAL (04/07/16)
- TITLE: If Only For A Day
By Wesley Hesketh
04/09/16 -
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
and what I have to say.
Father, please forgive me
if only for a day.
I know I’ve walked a crocked road
it’s all I seem to do.
But the world would be so empty
if I don’t have You.
My thanks is to You Jesus
that You died for me.
If it had not been for You
I would never be.
But my troubles are so endless
they’re eating up my mind.
Yet I am redeemed again
God, you are so kind.
You lifted my fallen spirit
no matter what I do.
That’s why I shout for all to hear
that I love You too.
I hope You’ll never tired
of my evil ways?
I’ll always be here so social
in all I do and say.
I know that You’ll forgive me
I am so very weak.
And You have the answer
to everything I seek.
So once again I ask You
You know that I have tried.
No matter if I run away
there is no place to hide.
What You do for me
is so very much.
I pray in everything I do
You will put Your touch.
Save me from the Evil One
who whispers in my ear.
I pray You’ll never leave me
and You’ll hold me near.
Help me with the things I do
and the things I say.
Hold me in Your loving arms,
if only for a day.
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"But my troubles are so endless they’re eating up my mind.Yet I am redeemed again
God, you are so kind."
Red Ink: I noticed a few words that were either mispelled "crocked". Did you mean "crooked"? or in the wrong tense (past vs present).
Great message. Keep writing.
God Bless
I liked the repeated lines in the first and last stanzas as well as in the title.
The rhyming words were well chosen and the length of the lines made it easy to read and understand your thoughts.
Blessings~