The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting! A fun read. It held my attention till the end, and I loved the voice of the main character. The descriptions were excellent. Good job!
Ooo, I loved the ending!
An 'angel' before the storm! Wonderfully told! Just enough well crafted detail to really bring this to life.
Interesting read. Very well written.
Good descriptive sentences. Sweet story and I liked the ending. Why should God use angels when he can use a willing heart?
Your terminology was very realistic! I enjoyed it through and wished it hadn't ended.
Good atmosphere and period of time. I think he was both and I really enjoyed reading this!
You can tell that you know what you are writing about. This story reminds me of the "Little Britches" series-a wonderful set of books from that time.
A great read - as always.
Like the story ... like the implications ... as always, like your style of writing.

What I didn't linke was the number of times you used the words "dust" and "wind" in the piece. From a pro like you, I'd like to see more diversity.

Doesn't detract from your obvious skills, though. Keep it up! Do I sense another series coming on?
Enjoyed the images and character development. Left me wondering, "What's going to happen?" Ready for chapter two!