The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/16
Very powerful description. You said so much in so few words.
03/04/16
Beautiful! I loved it.
03/05/16
I absolutely love this. Thank you!
03/05/16
Simply fabulous and an incredible read!

Blessings~
03/10/16
Congratulations, JE, on placing 2nd place in the Advanced category. Your piece had a very poetic quality.
03/10/16
Congratulations, JE, for placing 7th place overall. That's quite an achievement.
JE - This was a thought provoking piece. I liked your perspective and out of the box thinking.

Congratulations on your EC Award. Well deserved.
03/11/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
05/26/16
Lea, this is exactly the type of creative out-of-the-box writing I like to read. By the beginning of the second paragraph, I had tears in my eyes and was anticipating HOW your words would take the Son from eternity to earth.

Though I [personally] would love to see this in a longer article, the way you kept it brief and ended it so succinctly -- with the true message in the final sentence -- is superb.

Your word picture choices made me smile:
-- He 'folded up ... His reputation'
-- He stopped to 'compress' Himself into the designated clay garb, 'common and unadorned'
-- He stepped off the ledge into 'time'
-- the 'stench' of flesh