The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/16
Your story reminded me of my first days in school. Busing had just started in my school district, so we had an equal amount of black and white students.

I think you could just eliminate the first paragraph and start with the first day of school.
03/05/16
Thanks for taking us back to childhood days in this very descriptive and touching entry.

Well done.

Blessings~
03/08/16
I too walked through the memories of my first day at school while reading this entry. Lovely piece of writing thanks.