The Official Writing Challenge
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I think Linda had a reason for her frustration, but I'm glad she decided to leave the result in God's hand. Nicely written story.
Great job creating a sense of mystery and suspense at the beginning of the story! It was an interesting read with a poignant lesson.
Well done, nice suspense. Tiny red ink: timeline. Hubby has to be at work at 8; then later in the morning wife goes to front desk where she's told manager will be in at 9. I think maybe the manager needed to be in later that day, or the wife needed to go down to the front desk immediately. Just a tiny detail.
Great job with the topic in content and delivery! I really thought this was well done.