The Official Writing Challenge
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The letters were heart felt and made the story come to life. I believe if you re-workex the opening sentence, it would hook your reader earlier in your story. Well done.
I enjoyed the letters. I didn't know anyone in the dead letter office answered letters to God. That doesn't seem plausible when you consider the details in the letters. A stranger would not know those details, so maybe you could come up with a different beginning.