The Official Writing Challenge
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Great. I love mysteries.You did a good job, must have a forensics background
I think this is a great mini mystery. You have a great sense of suspense. It was a little hard to follow. I think the word count limited you some. I totally can relate to that. I think you could tweak this and maybe even turn it into a book. I loved your character and your take on the topic.
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