The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/16
Very well written. I love the part: "There’s mud, food and pee everywhere." So cute.
Keep up the great work!
02/20/16
I got a kick out of this. In p.1,
frequently be stepping..." is an incomplete sentence.
02/21/16
I loved this story about being a mum to boys. I've also experienced almost falling in the toilet when the seat is up. I'm glad you have time for the hugs and kisses.
Excellent, well written and hilarious! I laughed out loud.
I loved your descriptions in this piece and your vivid descriptions. Wonderful story.
02/22/16
I liked the format of your article. It made me wonder what was coming next. Enjoyable read.
02/24/16
I liked your article and could relate, especially to the cuddling part. It's probably just a personal preference things but I think you could have continued with the same "you know you are a Mum" for the last paragraph, too. Thanks for sharing this encouraging piece!
Delightful!
02/25/16
Enjoyed your tribute to indefatigable moms.
haha mud, food and pee everywhere indeed!