The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/16
Great testimony about your father. You might want to add more detail on how your family went from poverty to prosperity. God bless you and your writing.
02/20/16
Interesting story. I noticed commas where they weren't needed; other places where they were needed, they were left out.
02/22/16
An inspirational story of rags to riches.

Correction:
Why don't all my friends become Christians?
02/23/16
Thank you for challenging me to be like Caleb. What a powerful testimony. Great spiritual truths in this piece of writing.
02/25/16
A great story of faithfulness. I must look Calab up when I get settled in heaven. Can add no more red ink as it has already been highlighted. I too would have enjoyed a little more about your father's journey as his faithfulness was the vehicle. Word limits I know:)